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??寫作（共兩節，滿分40分）第一節 基礎寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）你是校報小記者，最近進行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況: 時間: 上周末對象: 眼科醫生（eye-doctor）王教授主題: 我國中小學生近視（short-sightedness）問題基本信息: （1）發生率: 略高于50％（2）人數: 世界第一專家解讀: （1）原因: 很復雜（2）治療: 沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視（3）建議: 不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動（4）特別提示: 如何握筆也和近視有關[寫作內容]根據以上情況寫一篇采訪報道，并包括如下內容: 1。
?? 采訪的時間、對象和主題；2。 中小學生近視的發生率及人數；3。 專家解讀。[寫作要求]只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。[評分標準]句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。【答案】Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ short-sightedness。
?? It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No。 1 in the world, are short-sighted。 Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness。
?? He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises。 What’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen。
??【評析】主要有以下特點：一、作文話題從學生實際生活中采點今年基礎寫要求學生用5句話寫一篇關于中小學學生近視眼的校報采訪報道。這個話題真正的做到“話題來源于學生實際生活”。近視眼是每個校園所必不可少的現象，是學生校園生活得隱形熱點。因此今年的基礎寫作題目讓每個學生都有話可說。
??二、作文話題選材貼近新課程標準理念作文話題在引用了醫生建議的同時也在暗地里給考生提示該如何保護眼睛。單從這一點來講，今年的基礎寫作題目成功的做到了“時刻關注每一個學生的健康成長”，成功的把新課程標準理念注入到學生的考卷中。三、作文的話題具有極高的深思熟慮性考試的作文話題只有保證每一個考生都熟悉才能真正的做到命題的公平合理性。
??今年的作文話題從每一所學校學生的實際生活中采點，徹底的革除了城鄉考生因對某一個話題了解程度的不同而導致的不合理性。這也說明今年基礎寫作題目的命題人經過了多方面的深思熟慮。第二節 讀寫任務（共1小題，滿分25分）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
??Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia。 All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining。
?? You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off。
?? That’s right—sleep it off。 The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy。
?? The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience。
?? Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable。
?? How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?* 考拉即樹袋熊[寫作內容]1。
?? 以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容；2。 然后以約120個詞就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”進行議論，內容包括: （1）人們在參觀動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照；（2）假如你處在那些動物的處境，你會有什么反應；（3）你認為是否應該禁止游客和動物拍照。
??[寫作要求]1。 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2。 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。[評分標準]概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。【答案】The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos。
?? The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals。The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people。
?? Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have。
?? But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals。If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed。
?? No having peaceful surroundings to sleep, don’t you suffer restless and fidgets。 No doubt we do and so do the animals。I think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals。
??【評析】主要有以下特點：一、在考察學生基礎知識的同時也在培養學生價值觀的形成今年的讀寫任務讓學生就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”展開議論。議論文的寫作有助于培養學生正確的價值觀，糾正不正確的價值觀。今年的讀寫任務暗中旨在培養學生保護野生動物的觀念、把多一點的空間還給動物的觀念、與動物和諧共存的觀念。
??二、閱讀材料具有很強的傾向性通過瀏覽讀寫任務的閱讀材料，我們可以感覺到文章運用了一種抱怨的寫作方式，即抱怨游客過頻繁的與動物園里的動物進行拍照從而影響到動物的正常生活。而讀寫任務的寫作要求又讓學生就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”展開議論，因此如果考生從“應該禁止游客和動物拍照”這一觀點入手的話就迎合了閱讀材料，同時也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞。
??據了解，絕大多數考生都從“應該禁止游客和動物拍照”這一觀點入手。