更新時(shí)間：2021-06-27 14:12:08作者：admin2
高考英語滿分作文-租房
假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右：
2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以‘which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。
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譯:
我很高興收到你的信，我很高興地聽到你會(huì)去中國且在我們這里學(xué)習(xí)中文的消息。我已經(jīng)找到了寓所。在芳草街，不遠(yuǎn)處就是我們的中文學(xué)校。乘坐11號(hào)巴士就可以到達(dá)，前一站就是中文學(xué)校。寓所是在三樓,有3個(gè)房間，其中一個(gè)是臥室，其他兩個(gè)衛(wèi)生間和廚房。有一張床，一個(gè)沙發(fā)和一個(gè)辦公桌，25平方米小公寓里有椅子，租金是每月500元。也許這房子不如你的愿望，但我會(huì)盡我所能，滿足您的需求。如果還不夠，給我寫信，我會(huì)尋找另外一個(gè)更好的地方。
希望你能很快來到這里！
就到這里啦！
此致，
李華